She is on screen and just few inches away
Spelling magic in different style al the way
I sink with all happiness in a day
She is simply wonderful and standing at bay
I might have not taken note of her
If she was just normal and had nothing to offer
But here she stood exceptionally in unique position
All smiles in one direction to raise lot many questions
I slipped into past history of ancient era
Where even saint had lost concentration
I thought of my being as poor human being
She was there for all praise from me as king
I am aware of natural beauty in person
Some are looked nice with many reasons
But here she stood as marvelous art
All body parts engraved from marble parts
She laughed at when I praised with words
This was just excuse for looking forward
I failed to grasp her mood in time
Shivered within and crumbled sometimes
"Will you be my perfect man" she uttered
The situation was now fully altered
The whole scene was slipping away from my grip
I thought I may fall down on earth for early sleep
It happens sometimes when unusual things happen
Your minds runs faster and sometimes sharpen
So many things shape up there after even
As such things are taking place all of sudden
I am elated at the words spoken
I thought about them as token
But no, she was serious enough to accept
Me as her dream man in mind and to be kept
I am lucky person to find a beauty with brain
Even though to find a beautiful lady is not my aim
She must be as natural as possible
To stay for ever without crating any troubles
This remainds me of the story of Sage Viswamithra and Menaka. When the Cupid shoots his arrow, no mortal can escape from the act of love. Even the Lord Shiva fell a victim for his flower arrow, though with his third eye Shiva burnt him into ashes. The eyes of a woman is sharper than a blade, is the proverbial saying. Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai Feb 22,2012
« Delete » ?? ?????? ??.. just great Bozena Nena ciekawe.... lio nice » Elzbieta Kry.. very... nice.
The meaning of your poem is very clear, even if there are a few difficulties with the language.
This is good. Praise to the Queen in our lives. I like to some times write long poems. What is a pain to me is the figuring out uneeded words and still have it sound good when read.
This is a lovely poem. The usage of imagery brings me right into the scene. Exceptional! ! Can't wait to read more!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
She is on screen and just few inches away Spelling magic in different style al the way