Make It Tonight Poem by Katherine Cobing

Make It Tonight



He felt the world is spinning
But stood there still
Felt his nose was bleeding
But never minded the chill

He saw his loving wife
Bare, naked, blooded
Cried, he never saved her life
She was staring at him, cold dead

He knelt to his knees
Felt them shaking
He bent to give her a kiss
While he was saying,

'I love you, dear
And Lord, make me feel so real alright.
There's pain and fear
That if I may die, make it tonight.'

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joanne Hilado 04 April 2009

wow.5 stars fer you my dear friend: ]

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 23 December 2008

BEAUTIFUL...SO YOUNG YET SO TOUCHING VERSES....

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The ending opens the whole poem.. You wrote this well Krista

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