hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 45,281 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Make Others - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

You may have author
As an owner
Or creator
To share honor

You are simple verse
Holy and simple of course
To be read by all
And to shared for call

Retain
Maintain
Or keep in album
To read with freedom

Poetry
It is gift from an Almighty
Not all can write
For passion to ignite

Let people delight
And feel right
With its sacred flow
And match with wind's blow

If you can make others laugh
Or inspire to walk in rough (weather)
You poems can be called worth
To be felt unique till last breathe


Comments about Make Others by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    Good thought over poem- - - - - -


    Subhashchandra Adhav2 hours ago
    Well composed- - - - - -
    Good read
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  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    Such Beautiful Wisdom Hasmukh!

    Krystal Koru From Down Under2 hours ago
    Love your words of wisdom...to share the truth is wonderful....to share a poem
    is an honor.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 6:21:00 AM)

    nice rythem

    lungile lolo lubuzo2 hours ago
    you really good at rhythm and rhymes of poetry.
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  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 6:20:00 AM)

    real cool


    Leanne Walsh2 hours ago
    inspirational (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 3:19:00 AM)

    Shobha Paul and Anjana Choudhary like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 2:33:00 AM)

    You may have author
    As an owner (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, July 21, 2014


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