Make Your Victim My Soul. Poem by Brittney Karasek

Make Your Victim My Soul.

Rating: 3.8


Dust clings to my eyelids,
insects dance on my broken nails.
A mouth half opened,
with once perfect teeth chipped and cracked,
a film of filth is layered over the darkened white.
I'm made of little things, things that cannot think.
Take your pain out on me, I am your tourniquet.
I lay open and tattered in a room of breaking glass,
dirt and blood line the cracks on the walls,
magnetized like moths to a flame.
I am destroyed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 02 December 2008

a rhetoric poem with enchanting words

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 November 2008

I love your writes Britt.Theres some charm in those lines.Your captivation has made me lost in your world for a lil while.Excellent piece!

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Brittney Karasek

Brittney Karasek

Oklahoma, United States.
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