Meeting And Following The Mermaids Poem by Justin Gildow

Meeting And Following The Mermaids

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Far away from land
I'm swimming under the sea
Looking for some sea treasures
Either hidden or out in plain sight
On the ocean's floor


As I swim about the sea
Looking on the ocean floor for conch shells
and rare pearls
I feel a tap on my shoulder
And I about jump out of my skin
But I quickly go calm and turn around
And I look at you and your mer sisters
Smiling and looking at me

Being amazed yet stunned
You all are a beauty to behold
And I'm stuck in a dream-like state

You all start to swim ahead
And a few of you wave your hands to me
to follow
Looking all around me
And still perhaps in a state of disbelief
I abandon all reality
And I follow all of you
Swimming under the sea
While wondering what's waiting for you all
And wondering what's waiting for me
Up ahead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhay Vignesh L 30 January 2011

impressive and well imagined.Escaping into a world far away from our busy existence

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Justin Gildow

Justin Gildow

Washington, PA
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