hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 25,974 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Miles to go


Don’t frown upon my poems?
They are all dear and gems,
I don’t adore but donate,
Give it to others but not narrate,

I cerate them in days light,
Win the war without any fight,
Never to assert authority or right,
No goal less life but with vision and sight,

Where does poems take you?
Near to God and near to THOU,
It is not simple expression of words,
Planted by HIM and blessings from LORDS,

So I go all out for its truest presentation,
Nothing leaves behind for any question,
It is simple form of expression,
Not invading in domain with any aggression,

I wish you could walk and think,
Come along with when I sink,
Your blessings will encourage or instill,
I have miles to go and work unfinished still.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Diwakar Bhatt (7/6/2011 1:50:00 AM)

    You have become a master craftsman in this art after so big a volume of poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/17/2009 11:37:00 PM)

    I wish you could walk and think,
    Come along with when I sink,
    Your blessings will encourage or instill,
    I have miles to go and work unfinished still.
    -------
    Heart felt verse...you always pointed out the reality of humanity...meaningful as always! ! ! 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (6/22/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    All ends well that begins well. We are all beginners in the field of poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sara S (6/21/2009 8:13:00 PM)

    i liked it! keep writing! *grin* (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jane Meyer (6/20/2009 12:42:00 PM)

    We all have miles to go and though it is easier with the support of others we can make it wihout them too. Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (6/20/2009 8:15:00 AM)

    Yes, indeed you have miles to go and to compose many more good poems like
    this one! 10! -Raj Nandy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Danny H (6/19/2009 9:55:00 PM)

    i love the wisdom you are fulfilling us with: ]
    beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cristy Upshaw (6/19/2009 10:01:00 AM)

    well done. we all have miles to go, no matter your age. this was filled with wisdom and expressed very dearly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rose MaryB. (6/18/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    nice job. gave good expression (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christina Phan (6/18/2009 10:48:00 PM)

    wonderful job
    ur so talent and gd
    at writing thts is such an aspiriation to me
    kept it up
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 929 Points Saadat Tahir (6/17/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    yes hasmukh....human discoure and words are finite and within the realms of our observed dimensions..
    but then so is our understanding and enjoyment

    well written
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (6/17/2009 6:07:00 AM)

    a fine and truly giving the picture thinking miles to go........ fantastic write... (Report) Reply

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