Miles To Go Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Miles To Go

Rating: 4.8


Don’t frown upon my poems?
They are all dear and gems,
I don’t adore but donate,
Give it to others but not narrate,

I cerate them in days light,
Win the war without any fight,
Never to assert authority or right,
No goal less life but with vision and sight,

Where does poems take you?
Near to God and near to THOU,
It is not simple expression of words,
Planted by HIM and blessings from LORDS,

So I go all out for its truest presentation,
Nothing leaves behind for any question,
It is simple form of expression,
Not invading in domain with any aggression,

I wish you could walk and think,
Come along with when I sink,
Your blessings will encourage or instill,
I have miles to go and work unfinished still.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 17 June 2009

a fine and truly giving the picture thinking miles to go........ fantastic write...

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Saadat Tahir 17 June 2009

yes hasmukh....human discoure and words are finite and within the realms of our observed dimensions.. but then so is our understanding and enjoyment well written cheers

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Christina Phan 18 June 2009

wonderful job ur so talent and gd at writing thts is such an aspiriation to me kept it up 10++

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Rose MaryB. 18 June 2009

nice job. gave good expression

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Cristy Upshaw 19 June 2009

well done. we all have miles to go, no matter your age. this was filled with wisdom and expressed very dearly.

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Diwakar Bhatt 06 July 2011

You have become a master craftsman in this art after so big a volume of poems.

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Catrina Heart 17 July 2009

I wish you could walk and think, Come along with when I sink, Your blessings will encourage or instill, I have miles to go and work unfinished still. ------- Heart felt verse...you always pointed out the reality of humanity...meaningful as always! ! ! 10+++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 22 June 2009

All ends well that begins well. We are all beginners in the field of poems.

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Sara S 21 June 2009

i liked it! keep writing! *grin*

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We all have miles to go and though it is easier with the support of others we can make it wihout them too. Nice poem!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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