Don’t frown upon my poems?
They are all dear and gems,
I don’t adore but donate,
Give it to others but not narrate,
I cerate them in days light,
Win the war without any fight,
Never to assert authority or right,
No goal less life but with vision and sight,
Where does poems take you?
Near to God and near to THOU,
It is not simple expression of words,
Planted by HIM and blessings from LORDS,
So I go all out for its truest presentation,
Nothing leaves behind for any question,
It is simple form of expression,
Not invading in domain with any aggression,
I wish you could walk and think,
Come along with when I sink,
Your blessings will encourage or instill,
I have miles to go and work unfinished still.
yes hasmukh....human discoure and words are finite and within the realms of our observed dimensions.. but then so is our understanding and enjoyment well written cheers
wonderful job ur so talent and gd at writing thts is such an aspiriation to me kept it up 10++
well done. we all have miles to go, no matter your age. this was filled with wisdom and expressed very dearly.
You have become a master craftsman in this art after so big a volume of poems.
I wish you could walk and think, Come along with when I sink, Your blessings will encourage or instill, I have miles to go and work unfinished still. ------- Heart felt verse...you always pointed out the reality of humanity...meaningful as always! ! ! 10+++
All ends well that begins well. We are all beginners in the field of poems.
We all have miles to go and though it is easier with the support of others we can make it wihout them too. Nice poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a fine and truly giving the picture thinking miles to go........ fantastic write...