Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Miles to go


Don’t frown upon my poems?
They are all dear and gems,
I don’t adore but donate,
Give it to others but not narrate,

I cerate them in days light,
Win the war without any fight,
Never to assert authority or right,
No goal less life but with vision and sight,

Where does poems take you?
Near to God and near to THOU,
It is not simple expression of words,
Planted by HIM and blessings from LORDS,

So I go all out for its truest presentation,
Nothing leaves behind for any question,
It is simple form of expression,
Not invading in domain with any aggression,

I wish you could walk and think,
Come along with when I sink,
Your blessings will encourage or instill,
I have miles to go and work unfinished still.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009

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  • Catrina Heart (7/17/2009 11:37:00 PM)

    I wish you could walk and think,
    Come along with when I sink,
    Your blessings will encourage or instill,
    I have miles to go and work unfinished still.
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    Heart felt verse...you always pointed out the reality of humanity...meaningful as always! ! ! 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Jane Meyer (6/20/2009 12:42:00 PM)

    We all have miles to go and though it is easier with the support of others we can make it wihout them too. Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Raj Nandy (6/20/2009 8:15:00 AM)

    Yes, indeed you have miles to go and to compose many more good poems like
    this one! 10! -Raj Nandy (Report) Reply

  • Danny H (6/19/2009 9:55:00 PM)

    i love the wisdom you are fulfilling us with: ]
    beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Cristy Upshaw (6/19/2009 10:01:00 AM)

    well done. we all have miles to go, no matter your age. this was filled with wisdom and expressed very dearly. (Report) Reply

  • Christina Phan (6/18/2009 10:48:00 PM)

    wonderful job
    ur so talent and gd
    at writing thts is such an aspiriation to me
    kept it up
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (6/17/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    yes hasmukh....human discoure and words are finite and within the realms of our observed dimensions..
    but then so is our understanding and enjoyment

    well written
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • rago rago (6/17/2009 6:07:00 AM)

    a fine and truly giving the picture thinking miles to go........ fantastic write... (Report) Reply

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