Mind Letting Go Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Mind Letting Go

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Life lying in beds, all across hospital floors,
holding people in many stages of life on earth.

Some so close to death there is no longer any
room for death to escape.

It then takes away all breath and beats of each
heart, as the mind lets go and it disappears be-
yond the gates of heaven, alone.

Saturday, November 7, 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Jayaraman 08 November 2015

Death.. The finality of mind letting go..an interesting perspective.. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Close to death I view my passion wonderfully in this poem shared beautifully with reality. Mind disappears here and reaches to gates of heaven.10

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