RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Gold Star - 82,216 Points (October 6,1950 / New Jersey)

Insight - Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Leaves, branches, trees waving good-bye to me
and playing a beautiful symphony with the
gentle breeze.
It touches my soul and draws me nearer to
heaven and God.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

An Observation:

Shells peacefully hanging,
swaying to the rhythm of
unseen air.

Comments about Insight by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/21/2016 10:34:00 AM)

    Thanks for this nice, little yet lovely poem with such a nice imagery...

    Leaves, branches, trees waving good-bye to me
    and playing a beautiful symphony with the
    gentle breeze. (Report) Reply

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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/26/2016 9:42:00 PM)

    Nature comes alive in this poem which tells of its amazing ability to inspire us to worship God. (Report) Reply

  • Kenneth Maswabi Kenneth Maswabi (1/19/2016 3:40:00 AM)

    The little things in nature carries an enormous spiritual load. You have captured your experience very well. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Akshat Shukla Akshat Shukla (1/16/2016 12:09:00 PM)

    Pleasant imgery, terse language, and a delightful, intensifying message. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (1/9/2016 4:31:00 AM)

    Let us respect the works of creation and, thank the Creator. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince Clarence Prince (12/8/2015 2:57:00 PM)

    Good for you, Rose Ann! Drawing closer to heaven and God is Good! (Report) Reply

  • Mary Mc Creath Mary Mc Creath (9/24/2015 2:39:00 AM)

    I enjoyed your musing and the words that came from it. They touched me. (Report) Reply

  • Dorothy- A. Holmes Dorothy- A. Holmes (9/18/2015 11:28:00 AM)

    Lovely in verse and presentation!
    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham Hazel Durham (9/6/2015 6:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful write with your insight like part of nature as it draws you close to God! (Report) Reply

  • Aisha Rehman Aisha Rehman (8/27/2015 2:39:00 AM)

    Thank you so much RoseAnn for such a nice compliments.I am touched by your words.
    Thank you once again.
    And All the Best for your poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (8/22/2015 7:20:00 AM)

    playing a beautiful symphony with the
    gentle breeze. fine poetic expression. thank you Roseann for letting me read it. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/6/2015 4:59:00 AM)

    I feel cold
    but remain bold
    not to be told again
    that my time is over to remain (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Case Thomas Case (7/31/2015 10:19:00 AM)

    beautiful and simple...nature is the sweetest muse. (Report) Reply

  • Albert Ahearn Albert Ahearn (7/29/2015 5:48:00 AM)

    The music of the spheres! thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjibsaha Aniketa Sanjibsaha Aniketa (7/7/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    A beautiful feeling tending towards infinite (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/15/2015 11:19:00 AM)

    Simply beautiful......................! (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (5/30/2015 7:52:00 AM)

    Natures way of spreading God's gifts to a believing heart...as I feel the poem lovely...regards (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (5/23/2015 5:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful loved your emotions and thoughts. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick Daniel Brick (5/5/2015 1:44:00 PM)

    It's amazing how close to where we are on earth heaven is when your mind is clear, your heart is light, and your soul is welcoming. You don't even need a celestial map. Just a prayerful poem. Your observation poem has that prayer-like quality of affirming belief based on faith - The gentle swaying is actually an invisible rhythm which means someone, an angel perhaps, is watching over things. Those are two wonderful beliefs - in the closeness of heaven and in a guardian watching over us. (Report) Reply

  • Sreelekha Premjit (1/20/2015 12:41:00 AM)

    I love the way you write and god bless you for being so prolific. You are an inspiration, truly! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 24, 2013



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