RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Gold Star - 56,081 Points (October 6,1950 / New Jersey)

Insight - Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Leaves, branches, trees waving good-bye to me
and playing a beautiful symphony with the
gentle breeze.
It touches my soul and draws me nearer to
heaven and God.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

An Observation:

Shells peacefully hanging,
swaying to the rhythm of
unseen air.

Comments about Insight by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

  • Veteran Poet - 1,100 Points Mary Mc Creath (9/24/2015 2:39:00 AM)

    I enjoyed your musing and the words that came from it. They touched me. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,778 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (9/18/2015 11:28:00 AM)

    Lovely in verse and presentation!
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,722 Points Hazel Durham (9/6/2015 6:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful write with your insight like part of nature as it draws you close to God! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 614 Points Aisha Rehman (8/27/2015 2:39:00 AM)

    Thank you so much RoseAnn for such a nice compliments.I am touched by your words.
    Thank you once again.
    And All the Best for your poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,863 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (8/22/2015 7:20:00 AM)

    playing a beautiful symphony with the
    gentle breeze. fine poetic expression. thank you Roseann for letting me read it. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/6/2015 4:59:00 AM)

    I feel cold
    but remain bold
    not to be told again
    that my time is over to remain (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,427 Points Thomas Case (7/31/2015 10:19:00 AM)

    beautiful and simple...nature is the sweetest muse. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 660 Points Albert Ahearn (7/29/2015 5:48:00 AM)

    The music of the spheres! thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 518 Points Sanjibsaha Aniketa (7/7/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    A beautiful feeling tending towards infinite (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,721 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/15/2015 11:19:00 AM)

    Simply beautiful......................! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,346 Points Ken E Hall (5/30/2015 7:52:00 AM)

    Natures way of spreading God's gifts to a believing I feel the poem lovely...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,821 Points Ramesh Rai (5/23/2015 5:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful loved your emotions and thoughts. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,931 Points Daniel Brick (5/5/2015 1:44:00 PM)

    It's amazing how close to where we are on earth heaven is when your mind is clear, your heart is light, and your soul is welcoming. You don't even need a celestial map. Just a prayerful poem. Your observation poem has that prayer-like quality of affirming belief based on faith - The gentle swaying is actually an invisible rhythm which means someone, an angel perhaps, is watching over things. Those are two wonderful beliefs - in the closeness of heaven and in a guardian watching over us. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 788 Points Sreelekha Premjit (1/20/2015 12:41:00 AM)

    I love the way you write and god bless you for being so prolific. You are an inspiration, truly! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 788 Points Sreelekha Premjit (1/20/2015 12:40:00 AM)

    I love the way you write and god bless you for being so prolific. You are an inspiration, truly! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,389 Points Amitava Sur (6/13/2014 7:28:00 AM)

    A very own poetical perception as viewed by the individual. As here in this way by the poet.

    Another view - - - -

    Again in the same situation another person will think as if along with the breeze the leaves, branches and the trees are bowing in a symphony to welcome the person in this earth to be with them.
    But in either way this is lovely to imagine (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 24, 2013

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