Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 237 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

*mirage - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

I knew I was wrong
In my perception
Only when I noticed the wind
Take a turn southwards,
Even as I thought
I was following her
On close heels,
As the shadows vouchsafed,
To find now she has gone far,
Though I could have caught up with
What I thought was my chance,
But for this tricky wind
That played thick,
Between me and my thinking,
Making me wonder how could wind
Play out the role of mirage,
In my sand-less waterless desire land…

Comments about *mirage by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Rookie Rahul Sharma (2/23/2014 3:46:00 AM)

    PERSPECTIVE write...
    loved it: -)
    thanks for sharing! : -) (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,660 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (12/29/2013 11:16:00 AM)

    Hello poet friend Kesav. Great imagery and wonderful poem, I enjoyed. I have been away awhile and wanted to thank you for your great support on my poetry in the past. Happy New Year! Loyd (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 937 Points Queeny Gona (10/13/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    Skeptical write and a wonderful read indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,125 Points Elena Sandu (3/25/2013 5:31:00 PM)

    Oh the wind loves to play so much, lucky the chosen ones, if they can feel the hint. I also feel sometimes that wind may be way much more than human mind could ever understand... As always dear friend your poems brings to function my morning still sleeping brain. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,724 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/21/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    Making me wonder. Good poem. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 21, 2013

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