(30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

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Mirror Mirror

Mirror mirror
You tell lies
Who put crows feet
Round my eyes?

Mirror mirror
Hanging there
Who put that grey
In my hair?

Mirror mirror
Is that me
Is that really
Me I see?

Mirror Mirror
Stop your fun
That's not me
That is my mum

Mirror mirror
Don't stare back
For it's bad luck
If you should crack

Mirror mirror
On days like these
When what I see
Doesn't please

Mirror mirror
My mood this day
Will ask you turn
The other way!

Submitted: Saturday, November 10, 2012
Edited: Thursday, December 06, 2012


Comments about this poem (Mirror Mirror by Stevie Taite )

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  • Lyn Paul (12/6/2012 5:26:00 AM)

    Love it Stevie, especially Thats not me that is my Mum scary, I have thought that too. When we are having a lousy day is when we do not like the mirror.

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  • John Brown (11/21/2012 10:43:00 AM)

    Like it Stevie. Mirrors tell lies anyway.

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  • Alla Simone (11/19/2012 2:03:00 PM)

    Playful and clever while also ringing of truth. Thanks for sharing another uplifting write!

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (11/17/2012 11:00:00 PM)

    mirror in all poetic cultures are common symbol but you streamlined it with a fresh approach

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  • Poetheart (going) (11/12/2012 7:43:00 PM)

    Do as I do, to see myself in the mirror, only from afar! ! kkakakakakakak.

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  • Thomas A Robinson (11/11/2012 6:02:00 PM)

    get rid of the mirrors and live within your own image.

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  • Valerie Dohren (11/10/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    I think mirrors should be banned! ! Great poem Stevie, I feel the same about my mirror.

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  • Jahan Zeb (11/10/2012 4:50:00 AM)

    Don't tell me I have grown old. That is a very nice poem.
    Good Work

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