I fell in love with the one
you were in love with
How could I not fall in love with you
You confused me
I could not separate the two
The guitar from the hands that played it
The music from the man... I should have known!
You were already taken
...... because the second one made you rise in love, dear.....
mistaken....yes; misgiven as well...inner conflict nicely expressed...thanks...10
so often repeated in music, art, and poetry wherein the artist becomes the object of affection as a result of the music, poem, sculpture and often the work enables the love of the two, the artist and the receiver, to become as one in sweet repose. Wonderful thought...
This is very cleverly composed and a theme that is repeated often in relationships, I'm sure. But the way your present your subject is almost like a puzzle for the reader to solve. I particularly liked the 'guitar from the man' allegory and the hint of wistfulness that never intrudes. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Such a clever creative title Sonya with a poem where love is not as simple as one would imagine. I really like the perspective you give this one. Top marks. love from Karin
beautuful and sad as the solo strumming into the dusk...along yon desert road... very well expressed sonya great write cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is really sweet and clever. I enjoyed it a lot.