Miss You Poem by emma xinyi

Miss You



I looked outside the window, it was a hot sunny day,
I can see butterflies dancing and birds singing.
My eyes are drawn to a tree,
On tope of that tree, there are five eggs ready to hatc.
Now, i can see a farmer watering the grass and feeding his dog.
This reminded me of my favourite pet that has past away.
The farmer reminded me of my father feeding his dog.
I wish my dad will come back, give me his hope, his love and his support.
I will continue to work hard, i will graduate and come back home to see my father, he will be so proud.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 13 August 2009

The farmer reminded me of my father feeding his dog. I wish my dad will come back, give me his hope, his love and his support. I will continue to work hard, i will graduate and come back home to see my father, he will be so proud. short but good poem written in story typ..thats why its really impressive and meaningful alot..enjoyed it and appreciate you for making good poems.. liked this piece.. realy good..10/10

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