Do you remember the days
When we promised one-another
To love and to forgive forever
To be happy with each other?
Then God was our witness
And the kiss was our seal,
And this sweet declaration
Is our everlasting bill!
Not being able to understand
The presence of our mutual absence
I keep praying the Almighty Lord
To give us strength and patience!
Remembering those precious days
I start missing you again,
Alas! Mountains and countries are between us
Speaking by phone is not enough!
I put my fingers on my ears and read this poem out aloud (thats what i ve been doing with like every poem i ve come accross here 2day lol) and i swear it brought tears to my eyes....maybe because i think i know how that feels... Well written
a poem that full of true emotions, feelings, pain... dont forget my dear... everyone can make promisses, but few can be true abt them. keep on writing and stop suffering 'ahchi' :)
Dear poet friend, Mountains, countries...even long boundaries could never be considered obstacles in front of an everlasting love! ! ! Love will endure...as long as God is supervising it all... God bless... 10+++ from me
Remembering those precious days I start missing you again, Alas! Mountains and countries are between us Speaking by phone is not enough! ....so beautiful in theme as well as in intent...it is beautifully interwoven in words....similarly i painted in miss i miss you....i loved it dear.............10 read mine Mary to marry.....anywhere.... butterflies around and no separate ways.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow really a sweet and rich poem and done with profesional and perfect way..meaningful and expression is enough interesting and impressive..well done 10/10