My First Love Poem by Angel's lyre

My First Love

Rating: 5.0


Evening, tender evening...
I could feel the summer breeze
Touching my face, caressing.
Oh, tender breeze...

Together at last...
There was nobody else but us,
Silvery shine of moonlight,
Your sweet glance and my vibrant heart,
Together at last...

Amorous? No, I wasn't amorous.
I just loved you as I still do now
First hug, first kiss...
What a wonderful world it is! !

Oh! I wan' to hear again and again
Sweet words of exultation
You and me, me and you
And your sweet whisper
'I Love You! ! ! ! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Lopez 04 June 2009

Woaaaaa. this really beautiful poem, mmm I love it lol :) ye get a 10

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what love u and me, me and u... ya ya ait is first love.. good imagination n feeling...10

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Josephine De Leux 11 June 2009

sweet as sugarpeas.

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Shekhar Joshi 23 June 2009

beautiful poem.......full of your love.......... great work..... ;) .......

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Sameer Ahmed 01 July 2009

First love is like a vaccination that captures a person in its herd and overwhelm the mind and soul of the true lovers....it is indeed a very wonderful feeling and you have written it very splendidly.....10

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 September 2015

Oh! I wan' to hear again and again Sweet words of exultation You and me, me and you And your sweet whisper 'I Love You! ! ! ! Romantic and full of desire. so is a real love experience. if we get a little bit of love we all will go on i life. we have a reason to live. thank you tony

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Akram Awadat 11 October 2009

fantastic poem, it make me feel what you write

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Afzal Shauq 04 October 2009

Oh! I wan' to hear again and again Sweet words of exultation You and me, me and you And your sweet whisper 'I Love You! ! ! ! ' veru much romantic and sweetly written poem..you said much in few lines..well done and loved it and let me say..you are doing a good job..a good poet you are 10/10

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

what a lovely piece this is.. very sweet indeed.. good to read.. you have written this with so much emotion... This is like a scene from a movie.. lovess shan

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 27 July 2009

beautiful piece, thanks for sharing

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