Moment Poem by HOWLIN' DERVISH

Moment



MOMENT

Pale orange sunlight
dancing upon Osumi’s waters
western mountains shadow
eastern icy clear

A wind touches as a fly’s wing
gentle, yet with some irritation
a moment nothing more
that stirred the imagination

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Hepner 23 April 2009

You convey that slight breeze so delicately... thank you!

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Fiona Davidson 06 December 2008

Lovely...I can see it in my mind...thank you

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Ric Bastasa 06 December 2008

indeed this poem has stirred my imagination.. just perfect.. a ten

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