Ankit Neil Sharma

Money 360 - Poem by Ankit Neil Sharma

Indus river is flowing
to the north of india
and, our country is engulfed
in the sea of corruption,

save my country
from these traitors
then, save my dignity

Comments about Money 360 by Ankit Neil Sharma

  • Rookie - 191 Points Jenie Franksay (10/17/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    a good thoughtful poem... add more feeling,
    increase poem length a bit.. keep writing. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,128 Points Dave Walker (8/10/2013 4:07:00 AM)

    A great poem, like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013

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