Moon Poem by Asma Khan

Moon

Rating: 4.9


Staring the sky at night
Moon magnificiently walking like a knight.

Crescent, quarter, half, full
Phases of the moon all.

Playing hide and seek in the clouds
But then also can be gazed through the hazy clouds.

When full moon or half moon
The tides also rises soon.

The strong gravitational pull of yours
Attract us all towards the beauty of yours.

You guard us from the sky whole night
With the galaxy milky way tight.

Beaming, lighting the world
You are the moon of the world! ! !

Friday, September 25,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.k Das 25 September 2009

so much is composed on moon and its beams..and so much will also be composed on moon, it is a thing of beauty, , joy for ever, , thanx

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 September 2009

You guard us from the sky whole night With the galaxy milky way tight. Beaming, lighting the world You are the moon of the world! ! ! aso cool and pleasing atmosphere under your guard of the sky...beautiful imagination and i lied yours every line...keep it up....10 read mine moon...moon lost...

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 25 September 2009

a beautiful poem with vivid images..well said

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Rehana Nazli 25 September 2009

Playing hide and seek in the clouds But then also can be gazed through the hazy clouds. thats a good description of the movement of moon.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 September 2009

Beaming, lighting the world You are the moon of the world! ! .............excellence ripples by beauty of grace beaming emblazoned, oh what a kind of imagery of love yet unequaled, yet yet flows by ingenuity,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 October 2015

serene, peace, lovely, mild light, a sense of attraction..... so many complements of moon.... well pictured thank you tony

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Akram Saqib 04 October 2009

moon is the symbol of rest and serenity, good use of similar words

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Obinna Eruchie 04 October 2009

Glowing in gracious light, is the moon that knight guarding us within its sight. Enchanting piece.

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Saadat Tahir 27 September 2009

my pick Staring the sky at night Moon magnificiently walking like a knight. very nice u bring in a gush of memories... lit and life the knight in shining armour....galloping in the night.... the glint the gleam the moat the boat... the possibilities and renderings are endless very nice cheers an ten

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 September 2009

The moon is the perpetual eye which is always staring at us, even when we don't see her. Please read: 'The Weeping Moon' by Hebert Logerie. Thanks!

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