Asma Khan


Lonely - Poem by Asma Khan

I am a lonely person
I have many people around me
But the feeling of loneliness
Its deeply seated in me

The birds are chirping
I can hear the voices
My kids are chatting around
But I feel lonely, I am a lonely
person.

To subside the feeling
I mingle with my kids
Playing with them for a while
Making them laugh.

Then again I feel lonely
Its my inner feeling
I am a lonely person
like a lonely tree in the desert.
I am a lonely person!


Comments about Lonely by Asma Khan

  • Rookie Paul Hong (3/4/2012 10:31:00 PM)

    this is the first poem i felt a connection with.. (Report) Reply

    2 person liked.
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  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (3/2/2012 8:59:00 AM)

    this is absolutely a piece of gem of poetry, i like it most. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ata khan (9/5/2009 4:23:00 AM)

    I can understand the feeling, but believe me this feeling is temporary. A time comes when this person who feels lonely becomes the ray of hope for others. And then that is a very good feeling. You'll never feel lonely after that.

    Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Sahar Sahar (9/4/2009 3:28:00 AM)

    Lonely heart pains to cry......loneliness is hard to face.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (9/4/2009 3:13:00 AM)

    Loneliness portrayed in simple words.
    Best Wishes

    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (9/2/2009 2:53:00 PM)

    WOW!
    finely penned the feelings!
    hope more fine poems from you will come.
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jaideep Garg (9/2/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    dont have words to explain this.. i admire ur blue poetry.... the why u wrote it up..+10 mam... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 354 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (9/1/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    quite passionate being alone, heart when knows necessity of togetherness, lucid flow feeling across the alienation, well penned,10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, September 7, 2009


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