Asma Khan

Lonely - Poem by Asma Khan

I am a lonely person
I have many people around me
But the feeling of loneliness
Its deeply seated in me

The birds are chirping
I can hear the voices
My kids are chatting around
But I feel lonely, I am a lonely

To subside the feeling
I mingle with my kids
Playing with them for a while
Making them laugh.

Then again I feel lonely
Its my inner feeling
I am a lonely person
like a lonely tree in the desert.
I am a lonely person!

Comments about Lonely by Asma Khan

  • Gold Star - 54,928 Points Roseann Shawiak (9/3/2015 10:20:00 PM)

    Loneliness is inherent in humanity, we are solo individuals always seeking companionship and love. When our hearts and souls are not fulfilled we become lonely, living in a void. Trying to join our children or others is only temporary, we need an interior life of spirituality to blossom and give us what we truly need within. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Paul Hong (3/4/2012 10:31:00 PM)

    this is the first poem i felt a connection with.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,065 Points Wahab Abdul (3/2/2012 8:59:00 AM)

    this is absolutely a piece of gem of poetry, i like it most. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ata khan (9/5/2009 4:23:00 AM)

    I can understand the feeling, but believe me this feeling is temporary. A time comes when this person who feels lonely becomes the ray of hope for others. And then that is a very good feeling. You'll never feel lonely after that.

    Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Sahar Sahar (9/4/2009 3:28:00 AM)

    Lonely heart pains to cry......loneliness is hard to face.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (9/4/2009 3:13:00 AM)

    Loneliness portrayed in simple words.
    Best Wishes

    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (9/2/2009 2:53:00 PM)

    finely penned the feelings!
    hope more fine poems from you will come.
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jaideep Garg (9/2/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    dont have words to explain this.. i admire ur blue poetry.... the why u wrote it up..+10 mam... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,030 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (9/1/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    quite passionate being alone, heart when knows necessity of togetherness, lucid flow feeling across the alienation, well penned,10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, September 7, 2009

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