Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Moon and Sun


Where is love?
He showed the moon
Where is life?
He showed the sun
No love without moon
No life without sun
Without sun
Moon won't shine
There's no love
Without life.

Where are we?
Here on earth
And lives we lead
Sun keeps shining
Moon floats and turns
Let's fill this world
With love, love
And more love
Let eternity be
Our goal...
As long as the sun
Shines on the moon.

Submitted: Wednesday, July 31, 2013
Edited: Saturday, March 08, 2014

Topic of this poem: moon


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Comments about this poem (Moon and Sun by Tirupathi Chandrupatla )

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (8/3/2013 5:30:00 AM)

    Love is the greatest force in the universe and we are the only species to understand that. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 605 Points Shahzia Batool (8/2/2013 11:17:00 PM)

    we get lessons of life from the continual courses and disciplines of the heavenly bodies...enough things to observe and study are scattered in the book inscribed on the firmament...you are right in your logic! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,082 Points Valerie Dohren (8/2/2013 2:08:00 PM)

    Lets fill this world with love - a great philosophy, and a lovely take on the sun and the moon. A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 429 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/2/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    A n amazing poem on the Moon and the Sun.The last eight lines spell the universal truth in definite terms! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,742 Points Babatunde Aremu (8/1/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    Truly life without love is war. Great write, I like the theme. Kudos (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,841 Points Ramesh Rai (8/1/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    great write sir
    Let's fill this world
    With love, love
    And more love
    Let eternity be
    Our goal...
    As long as the sun
    Shines on the moon. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/1/2013 8:15:00 AM)

    Well said there is no love without life...So true.. Beautiful poem with lovely message. (Report) Reply

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