Stars faded
And hegemony celebrated
By white light
On darkened land
As a milky globule
With greyish spots
Imprinted its clone
On window glass.
Hypnotic scene
Cooled the ambience
And beamed diversely
To light up
My inner vibe
Tides of calmness rose
As I heeded.
(6/24/2009)
wow! a calm beauty of the past entangle in your poetic words of immortality a beautiful piece of all time.... a 10 +++++
Superb Sameer, I have a calmness coming over me too from that moon in the window- lovely imagery
'white light on darkened land' indeed the moon is a vision of comfort on a lonely dark night... and thanks to the heavens we are never really left in total darkness....
beautiful through out..but beauty initself looses its charm so the last line delivers the impact....and it becomes majestic...
You have eulogised the peace and stillness of the night in this lovely poem...10
You capture the stillness and peace of the night and form into art..10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
tides of calmness rose as i heeded- lovely, this is what happens when we tune to nature. very beautifully expressed love' Mamta