If I Cry........ Poem by Sameer Ahmed

If I Cry........

Rating: 4.7


If I cry
Don't stop me
Let the rain of tears fall on ground
And moisten the soil
For I like its silty fragrance.

If I cry
Don't look at me
For I will wipe off
The pearl like droplets
And become insomniac.

If I cry
Don't befuddle me
For it will disrupt
The streamline flow
Of my contemplations.

If I cry
Don't pat my sodden cheeks
For it will not help me
Removing the clouds of self-pity
From my inner vibe.

If I cry
Don't halt me
Let the watermark form on the floor
For it will guide me
To the upcomings.

If I stop
And recoup myself
Don't interrupt me
Let a new thought be born
For the sake of my teardrops.




(1/3/2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber Green 29 January 2009

wonderful poem. very deep and heart-felt.

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Iris Washington 29 January 2009

A heart-felt poem. Love it. Gave it a ten.

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Little Morning Star 29 January 2009

After we cry we can be more relieved.. I feel it too.. touching poem..

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Mary Naylor 05 February 2009

Sometimes we heal through our tears. Movingly written.

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Erica Kandow 09 February 2009

I really like your poem its really good. Every one should be able to cry and be pround of it, not to be ashamed of it! Love the poem

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 July 2009

Beautiful poem. If I appreciate don't stop me let my adoration flow out from my heart and praise Sameer Ahmed For like the fullness and fragrance of this.................

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Erica Bowden 23 June 2009

This is probably my favorite poem that I've read. It is beautiful.

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if i cry donot stop me... what an thought dear... u deserve 10. i u get the time pse read mine 'Cry not' and find similarity tks

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Joyce Lam 04 June 2009

Nice poem....hope everyone become stronger after they cried

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Nice and lucid, lovely poem. 10++

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