Moon Song Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Moon Song

Rating: 5.0


I looked into the eyes of the moon
and he smiled,
and said,
go soon
you'll never,
won't ever,
together
again be.

I stood there cold, mind unfolded
to endless whys,
uncertain sighs.
I must go
I know
whenever
together
can be again.

The moon looked back, reflecting thoughts
and winked his eye
when spotlights caught,
so go
you know
if ever
together
is to be.

Sally Plumb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 26 January 2012

How fascinating and enjoyable. Try mine -On The Horns of The Moon - Adeline

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Sally PP. 22 April 2019

I really appreciate your lovely comment.

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Dale Mullock 20 July 2010

Hi Sally, I couldn't leave a comment for Summer Shade which I thought was brilliant with sun moving through the day and you caught out by the suns rays... superb penning! However i then found this one! This has almost a child like glee and yet sombre and sorrowful twist to it. Love the quick rhyme and flow that only lets you pause on the moon line and his thoughts... really well thought out and simple in delivery but so breath taking and emotive. I love your style Sally, keep up these wonderful ditties of yours! Dale :)

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Sally P. P. 27 November 2018

Thankyou very much for your interest and comment.Best Regards.

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nomad omnia 22 March 2009

This is beautiful Sally...touches the heart. Moon madness, moon sadness. N

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Sally P.P. 28 April 2019

Thankyou for your lovely comment.Best wishes to you.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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