Mark R Slaughter


Moon, We Look To You. - Poem by Mark R Slaughter

Moon, you have a shade of blue tonight –
Is it something that you saw or heard?
Only yesterday, your tone was proud and bright,
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Comments about Moon, We Look To You. by Mark R Slaughter

  • Rookie - 298 Points Daniel Y. (2/5/2014 6:30:00 PM)

    Wonderful. Magnificent. Tidal Lord. Metaphors of cloud. Dance between the earthly view and the heavenly concern. Our relationship to it, and it to us. Each stanza begins with Moon, each like its own letter. But still one voice, endearing like a lost love. I loved this poem, please read some of mine! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Princess Wannabe (2/20/2011 1:11:00 AM)

    We're despairing - so we look to you......so true! ! ! there is a sense of hopefulness in the moon, interestingly...beautiful lines! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rohit sapra (4/14/2009 4:25:00 PM)

    Moon is so inspiring, the moon surely is always needed to glow the surroundings of the earthly earth. This poem surely deserves 10 out of 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (4/14/2009 4:21:00 PM)

    Excellent write...and the moon is a funny shade of blue tonight here too...10+++ (Report) Reply








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