Captain Cur

Rookie - 352 Points (England)

Moonlit Chambers Bath, Portrait Poems - Poem by Captain Cur

Envisioning rapture, Venusian stance
reflecting window gardens evening trance
solitary beauty weaves midnight path
pouring innocence in moonlit chambers bath.

Encased in armor, black sentinel watch,
my spirit trapped in polished keyless latch
large chalice light paved candle glowing burns
immobile Knight displays decorum's form.

Each night I stand as she disrobes in gold
upraise arms naked stained glass flowers fold
invoking sighs from heavy trembling steel
lifeless statue, what could ancient metal feel;
eyeless, mouth-less, earless mesh cross-stitched face
dreamless voids from dark cold heartless space.

One night intrigued she ventured stealthily
lifts my helmet her lips spoke silently
then turned my head toward the steaming mist
and bathed my dreams in droplets warming kiss.


Comments about Moonlit Chambers Bath, Portrait Poems by Captain Cur

  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (11/4/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    True triumph of all times for all discerning mind. A narrative on a realistic happening across your eventful life. A good piece dear Captain Cur (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/30/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    Dear Captain, from the mad and dangerous sea, you have came up with a great gem, it is called a brilliant gem.
    Great poem captain. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,260 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (9/28/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    A combination of allegory n romance as if romanticizin nature or vice verse. Awesome!
    Do read me but no pressure to coment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steven W. Chung (9/23/2012 4:32:00 PM)

    Wow! Speechless.

    -Steve (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Anita Sehgal (9/19/2012 5:18:00 AM)

    amazing... unique... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (9/16/2012 5:33:00 PM)

    really good flow and rhythm.... love your imagery! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (9/14/2012 7:56:00 AM)

    Dew of moonlit kiss blazoning the skin upon whom watching that spherical beauty...Inspired a poem that was written in delicate and beautiful artistry..really nice captain_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 13, 2012



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