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Scene playing in my Head
Every time Anger gets overfed
Screams inside making their way
To the outside…
where they Attack your face, and starts to play
And Hands…Stretching; Reaching your throat
To Grab it tight.
And Stop the Pain your words have brought
To hold the Air from going in…
The heart that you pretend…
Knows the Virtue…knows the Sin
Million times this Scene play
Where Sanity have no place to stay
Cause with Anger and Sadness
Happiness…Is murdered…
And the Mind…dancing in madness.
Sarah Ibrahim ©
Sarah Ibrahim
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Friday, April 03, 2009 |
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Saturday, August 08, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (...Murder...
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Sarah Ibrahim
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Roland Bastien (7/21/2009 9:57:00 PM)
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You capture in an accurate and expressive technic the insight of our human nature -
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Ashraful Musaddeq (5/25/2009 10:40:00 AM)
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'Cause with Anger and Sadness
Happiness…Is murdered…
And the Mind…dancing in madness.'
Nicely presented,10++
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Kesav Easwaran (5/1/2009 10:45:00 AM)
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sensitive write, Sarah...you use a strong and attractive vocab nicely to express your thoughts...good piece...thanks...10
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Akram Awadat (4/22/2009 2:58:00 PM)
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touching poem, well done
thanks for sharing sarah
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir (4/17/2009 6:24:00 PM)
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A murder within heart and mind.....No dagger, no blood. Anger kills many other feelings but sadness is always creative. Good write, Sarah.
Best Wishes
Naseer
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Yoonoos Peerbocus (4/11/2009 12:54:00 AM)
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i like the way you carefully select your ideas and then build up the theme/mood /tone -fine to read
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