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Roland Bastien
(7/21/2009 9:57:00 PM) |
You capture in an accurate and expressive technic the insight of our human nature -
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Ashraful Musaddeq
(5/25/2009 10:40:00 AM) |
'Cause with Anger and Sadness
Happiness…Is murdered…
And the Mind…dancing in madness.'
Nicely presented,10++
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Kesav Easwaran
(5/1/2009 10:45:00 AM) |
sensitive write, Sarah...you use a strong and attractive vocab nicely to express your thoughts...good piece...thanks...10
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Akram Awadat
(4/22/2009 2:58:00 PM) |
touching poem, well done
thanks for sharing sarah
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
(4/17/2009 6:24:00 PM) |
A murder within heart and mind.....No dagger, no blood. Anger kills many other feelings but sadness is always creative. Good write, Sarah.
Best Wishes
Naseer
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(4/11/2009 12:54:00 AM) |
i like the way you carefully select your ideas and then build up the theme/mood /tone -fine to read
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