My Angelic Drop Poem by Tareq Jalabi

My Angelic Drop

Rating: 4.8


angels had to drop
of water one drop
it left the sky high up
and fell gently in my half empty cup
she filled it with the happines that no one can stop
water doesn`t fall or pop
but this was a mericale in my cup
so when ur chance comes u should hop
to it and never wait for that drop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Reed 30 July 2008

wow. you are a great writer

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very very very nice work my bro keep moving upwards

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Serenity Prayer 08 August 2008

wonderful job! ! keep up the good work. =) i enjoy your poems.

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&&angel4ever && 08 August 2008

nice piece keep holding ur pen

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Arabian Heart 08 August 2008

a world of sweet poise an angel from the sky fall to place and let her rise what a thing for my heart to read please write more

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

I had enjoy readind this!

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Leslie Ching 27 December 2008

very interesting and picturesque...well done... lc

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Now this is a really very clever and very effective. Great work

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First i imagined a angel dropping then tears falling then someone crying. I like poems like that, so it was a great read, thanks for sharing.

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Anjali Chandra 20 November 2008

a very simple nice poem.i reaally like it

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