i had kept for years
waiting for u to call
now u r trying to apologize
as we met in a mall
you ask me if its late
no, not at all
now that i have
no heart no soul
and that there is
no lower place to fall
u can whenever
u feel like it, call
but there is nothing left in me
that u haven`t already stole
so leave me alone
whenever u see me in a mall
wow hey i wont leave u alone if i see u at the mall +++10 regards anjali
You're moving on! Good. I like the ways you made it simple but meaningful.
I liked how simply put your pain was and broken heart. I loved it! How all was stolen and you had no where else to fall, very nice I think!
as time went on you mend your broken heart together the way it was before ya'll met......and now your over it...... An incredible piece...yet simple but good
Bittersweet.. As good-bye so often is. Your pain is apparent. But your mood is resolute. 'no more'. I agree. You deserve better. I like your rhymes. Warm regards, Sandra
I love the rhyming you wrote this well.. great write KRISTA
incredibly heart wrentching makes me want to never enter a mall again, but i keep making that promise to myself
This is really great, I can really connect and feel for you, most of my poems are usually about love, thanks for sharing this...
now that i have no heart no soul and that there is no lower place to fall Great lines indeed
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
cute.. and sad.. I feel the pain in this poem.. Great piece of work Krista