My Family Poem by Savita Tyagi

My Family

Rating: 4.8


Earth is my mother
Father resides in starry sky
Fire and wind are my brothers
In waters reside my sisters and I
Someday when I lie low
Subdued in my lone thoughts
Unable to sense them as mine
Peace! Be there in my existence benign.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 May 2018

An elegant little piece of work! Lovely poetic expression! Loved reading it....10

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Akhtar Jawad 14 May 2015

What a wonderful family, I love this family....................10

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Khairul Ahsan 04 March 2014

This indeed is a wonderful poem. The last four lines are simply amazing!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 February 2014

You have covered all the five elements of life nicely.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 February 2014

your sister and you are blessed to travel in many different forms, wearing beautiful attires, sometimes transparent as the steam, sometimes cloudy and muddy, sometimes patterned with leaves and trash, sometimes quiet and composed as the ice and many more...Thank you savita Tyagi..

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