My Firework Poem by TheNameless Poet
My Firework
Don't speak to me, Ive heard enough
All the pain, I've gained from just one lie.
Inside my feelings explode like fireworks and
the shattered remains of my soul,
the soul you shattered, are like pieces of a mirror,
they reflect me, and now I have to put myself back together,
but it won't work,
I cant get back the pieces you stole,
the pieces I never wanted you to see,
but you saw and now they're gone.
Don't speak to me, I dont want to listen
The voices in my head are loud enough, grabbing my attention.
Ive had enough of this world, so full of pain.
What could we hope to gain from someone elses pain?
Don't speak to me, I might just crack
the pressure Im hoding within built up for so long,
now just under the skin. But I wont let it show
I'm the bin,
Im the one where everyone else dumps their problems
and I wont let my problems show
So please dont speak to me, I'm begging you now
because with words comes emotions, feelings
and like the feelings inside of me I might just explode
like a firework
but it wont be beautiful, it will be pain
and I wont be able to hold in my anger anymore
So please, Just please
Dont speak to me..
I felt the feeling of the poem in its meaning and the excruciating pain understands. The creative writing of poem in such senses is actually difficult but it had done well by the poet and a nice one I think.
I love the emotive language with which you write, because if you are able to make the reader feel and relate to what you have written then you have done your job, and as far as I am concerned you have certainly done your job. I love how you break your ideas up into different stanzas, this makes it easier for the reader to come to terms with the content in the poem as well as what they feel about the narrative offered. I especially love how you knot the poem together with the question right at the centre of the poem, it gives the poem a structured appeal. I think the repetition is a bit overused, but it is definitely effective and suggests that words hold more power than what we give them credit for. This poem is quite abstract and wont be a favourite among many because of its in your face factor, but that is precisely what emotions are and what lies make you feel like. An all round great poem :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 9:47:57 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This poem took me by surprise, Each time I read it it lights my fuse, But I don't want a bang, or a bright light, or wonder, I want to be kept in that half minute, of expectation, suspended in a breath, I want a slow burn.