My Heart Poem by Jake Samuelson

My Heart

Rating: 5.0


I gave you my heart
You manipulated me
Thrashed and Scattered
Now i lay, cold and empty
Forever i will lay, Cold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saane Pahulu 13 October 2009

short and sweet...so much meaning with a few short words. beautiful

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Annie Girl 21 August 2009

short and will written yet it says so much..... awsome work...

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Angelic Warrior 11 July 2009

goes deep....sad but heartfelt.....great piece!

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Shari . 31 March 2009

for a poem so short, it flowed and expressed it's meaning very well. nice work.

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