My Hero Poem by abby normal

My Hero

Rating: 5.0


Im in awe as i watch you
Im amazed in everyway
You've become my everything
I thank God for you every day

I've had dreams of you
They are still in my head
i tried so hard to see your face
Everynite before going to bed

You see, I started early
I've always longed for you
You are my hero, my knight in shinning armour
For you, there's nothing I won't do
As i've traveled thru my life
And have dreamt of you
I never gave up
Always I looked for the clue

I had just about given up
I thought i'd missed the dance
Then along you came
Willing to give me a chance

When you put your big strong arms around me
And look deep into my eyes
It's then i know
your kisses are anything but lies

God sent you to me
And without a doubt I knew
I wo'nt question it, ill just cherish it
This I promise i'll always do

You are mine and I am yours
For forever and a day
Never, ever forget this
Always, together we will stay

I love you! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted Sheridan 02 April 2009

I bet if you didn't worry about making it rhyme it would be great. For some reason I feel that if you had written what you saw in your head, your poem would have a rhythm all its own. a 10

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Randy Hogan 01 April 2009

So very moving and touching, truly a lovely read. the force is strong in your soul, and his. 10SSSSSSSS

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Sue Sie 26 March 2009

What a lovely verse...well done and thanks for sharing your thoughts..10+

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