My Inspiring Lady Poem by Sanjib Das

My Inspiring Lady

Rating: 5.0


You are in my dream,
you become my poetic theme.
What happens today,
I am waiting for you all the day.


You are physically absent,
In my heart, you are present.
Will you be present tomorrow?
In my mind, a lot of question in a row.


You are in my eye,
In reality, you are nigh.
In future, when you will be present,
May be, for ever, I am absent.

Oh Love! to myself I cried,
If my dream should be dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 27 June 2009

wowwwww such a lovely dream of your beloved nice to know that the woman you love is also a source of inspiration to you -10 anjali

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Lady Grace 28 June 2009

this is a beautiful poem dear, when you are inspired, everything is colorful..hope your inspiration will always be present in your heart, , hope she knows that she is your inspiration..love does not requires class record, absentism is not a hindrance to a good hope..goodluck to your poetry dear friend..grace

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Chitra - 29 June 2009

an appeal to the eternal muse to stay within, in sight forever...a great write

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 August 2009

Ammmmmmazing! heartcrunching love poem! 10+

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rago rago 08 July 2009

your inspiring lady let not let yu.............. fine write........

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Meggie Gultiano 07 July 2009

dont ever let your dream be dead.Stay it alive.. Love this, my dear

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 July 2009

'Oh Love! to myself I cried, If my dream should be dead' liked that ending friend.... this again is a nice write indeed...10++ with love shan.

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Arlette Murillo 03 July 2009

Beautiful....this is expressed very well. I congratualte you I've read your other poems and they're very very nicely written.: D I would appreciate if you would also take your time to read my poems. I would very much like to hear your opinion :) Keep up the good work :)

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