My Last Love- The Boat Of My Soul Poem by jyoti saxena

My Last Love- The Boat Of My Soul

Rating: 5.0


Ride royally the waters
Oh! boat of my soul.
Let there be gentle wind with me
a star or two for company.
For, I know now my spirit is whole,
My highwayman has come to boat my soul.
You see the calm of my ocean's deep
on my face, my body his love that seeps.
He who closes my eyes with a liquid kiss
and warms my breath with his balmy lips;
he who has laid his heart out
to warm my feet
In HIS boat- my soul I keep!
Oh! my last love put me to sleep!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A marvelous piece. This is the ultimate desire of every man/woman. U have expressed in a very lucid manner. Go ahead Jyoti. A good time ahead of u. I am too nicknamed as Jyoti. By the way what u do? ur husband & children? u do job or housewife? Regards - Pradeep (Jyoti)

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Young Insane 09 August 2008

aweeeeeeeeesome to me......

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rago rago 26 October 2009

blend of conscious innerthought...and exchanging true fronts..........in reality how we live? ...........excellent work..............

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 November 2008

A highly intense love............the rockin boat of love.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

Very nice; love bloomed with cute emotion. 10 for it.

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Reetessh Sabrr 26 August 2008

it takes me to the inner self where love hides and surfaces my last love again

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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 August 2008

You could make the images play before my eyes. Soooooo goooooood sathya narayana

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