My Life Poem by Sweet Death

My Life

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a tear

a secret

a silent scream

an unkept promise

a broken heart

a weary smile

a fake laugh

a forced hello

a lie

a dropp of blood

a death

a relentless pain

a sad song

a body

a cry for help

a suicide note

a life not worth saving

a funeral

a goodbye
My Life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 15 December 2008

Life is wonderful and full of colors...its up to us how we live...Thanks

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 December 2008

Life is much sweeter than your death, my dear child!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 December 2008

OMG........your death was sweet.........but it'll be sweeter if your alive......trust me dear.Great piece sweetie.

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