My Life Poem by Bron Dayvid

My Life

Rating: 5.0


My life is a cup of water one dropp away from overflowing
I'm ready give me a chance

My life is a clock that is an hour fast in the wrong time zone
I'm not procrastinating I'm letting everyone else catch up

My life is a rhetorical question that so many people feel they need to answer
My life is full of incorrect answers

My life is the sequel to a non existing movie
You know nothing about me

My life
Not Yours

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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