Heather Burns

My Magic Man Somewhere In Fantasy Land (Revised) - Poem by Heather Burns

Father Time with his
magic wand
touched our lives
creating a magic
wonder land

as you approached me
I was overcome by your
black curly hair framing
your face

Eyes blue as a cloudless
Skin liken to fine satin
lips as sweet as honey

Touch as soft as a kitten
heart of purest gold
body as strong as an oak

Reaching for me we were
swept away
to a magical paradise
somewhere in seventh

as night fell I enjoyed
your cradle of love
you are my magic man
somewhere in fantasy land.

Comments about My Magic Man Somewhere In Fantasy Land (Revised) by Heather Burns

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (8/8/2013 8:18:00 AM)

    I love it, very visual. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,247 Points Valsa George (8/8/2013 12:32:00 AM)

    So you dwell in that fantasy land with your Magic man, blissfully away from all harsh realities of life! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,231 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/7/2013 9:30:00 PM)

    Land of fantasy almost looks real. Fine poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,046 Points Dave Walker (8/7/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    A great poem, sounds like the perfect love to me. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013

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