ramesh rai

Gold Star - 12,649 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

My Pain My Pleasure - Poem by ramesh rai

Oh!
my pain
you are the reason
for longing me
for officious life
defeating all fuss
and impassable moment.

My pain!
hugged me
for a long time
my all scabrous moment
death could not snatch me
following life without respite

My pain!
regurgitate
all grief of life
bestowed
ecstasy of life.

Ah!
my pleasure
stayed
for a little moment
like the evening star
came and gone
billion of stars
could not illuminte
hopeful sky of my universe.


Comments about My Pain My Pleasure by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (11/21/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem on extreme ends Pain and Pleasure. But it travels together. Good write. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 534 Points Yasmeen Khan (11/17/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    Both pain and pleasure are ecstatic experiences, written nicely (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,541 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (11/15/2013 10:58:00 PM)

    There is no pleasure without pain. At times pain itself is pleasure for some. Also pain is of two kinds one is painful pain and the other pleasant pain. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/15/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    Wow one of yor best in metaphor! I love to read n use grandiloquent terms like u did in poems. Both pain n pleasure r transient to me. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (11/14/2013 7:53:00 PM)

    hopeful sky my universe, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, November 15, 2013


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