Vishal Sharma

Freshman - 524 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

My Passion - Poem by Vishal Sharma

If a kiss were a raindrop, I'd send you showers.
If hugs were a second, I'd send you hours.
If smiles were water, I'd send you the sea.
If love was a person, I'd send you me.
You are irreplaceable and irresistible.
Together we'll make this unbreakable.


Comments about My Passion by Vishal Sharma

  • Freshman - 849 Points Kaila George (4/10/2013 4:42:00 PM)

    I love this wow so touching and wonderful....incrediable write...just lovely (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,690 Points Hazel Durham (4/5/2013 6:28:00 AM)

    So beautiful, just a perfect gem, I loved it! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,829 Points Kavya . (4/5/2013 1:40:00 AM)

    excellent write thus making me say WOW: -) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,020 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (4/4/2013 1:46:00 PM)

    so sweet and rhythmic.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 46,310 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/4/2013 1:21:00 AM)

    love really unbreakable. fine one. thanks Vishal.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,470 Points Unwritten Soul (4/4/2013 1:06:00 AM)

    Oh this is a sweet lil poem...just so sweet..loved this write_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 11, 2013


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