A strictly forbidden place
Perhaps you would like
To enter into
As it would give you more
Pleasure than entering
Into a place
Very normal
As breaking rules
Gives you extra punch
Extra kick
Showers you as a rain
With exquisite delight
That’s why
Once a robot said
Man is very ridiculous
And I say that is ‘’will “
The same had happened with
Adam and Eve
As you all know
They ate the forbidden fruit
And that was sweeter
Than the normal
Pleasure is a light
That enters into a heart
And it can blow
In many ways
in many forms
Some one need coarse
Some one very fine
To let them
To arouse and feel them
the bliss of it
my greatest pleasure
In life is
Doing what once people said
‘You can not do ‘
when people say one cannot do it, that makes the person more eager to do it. And spurs them on to accomplish. I did not mean to be critical just thinking out loud. I love your work
Adam and Eve ate the forbidden fruit but at a great price. Was the apple really worth it? I really don't think so. (I think the apple is a metaphor) a really nice write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it was a pleasure reading this poem