My heart got a blow
But not by any foe
It’s the one I bow
Who made me sow?
The love I don’t know
She said a sweet hello
That made me show
All my lives grow
And even it’s low
Without saying a no
I forgot all my woe
And words of crow
Those made me mow
By my loves bestow
I stared to feel aglow
I made my heart throw
With in one single go
Into a land of snow
Where songs play slow
In a continuous row
I thought so and so
My love will glow
So I danced on toe
Then she said whoa
With expression of oh
It’s my day of below
She said it’s her kind show
And left me in costly owe
That I can’t pay my dear bro
From then my poetry got flow
such poem that leads us to know the basic of poetry.....a very practical way of expressing the feeling...clear and sound and understandable to each reader... worth to keep in the public and private library for who want to know the basic of poetry....thank for sharing.....a 10 +
YOUR POETRY IS SLOW, THIS MUCH WE KNOW BUT IT'S GOT A GREAT FLOW. GR8T WRITE A TEN
very nicely done! ! ! ! i like the flow and the rhyme AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Quite a good rhyme and rhythm. Refreshingly good. Kudos.
Flowing words so continously in vividness and fine rhymes too...10
great flow. i belive there is a lover in you whose thirst is yet to be quenched.great rhyming as usual. voted10 surya
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Interesting self analysis poem