My Precious Love. Poem by nathan hitchcock

My Precious Love.

Rating: 4.3


Her teeth are pearl white,
Her smile is gold.
Her heart is the definition of perfect
Her hair is the silk used to make the finest blankets
Her hand is the most delicate glass, and
When I hug her I am hugging beauty itself.

She is the fire in the lounge,
On a cold winters day.
Comforting, Warming
And trusting.


Yet, within all this beauty,
Is a girl who cries through a flower.
Disguising her sadness,
Locking it away, forever.


As I face this magnificent creature,
She is full of love,
full of fear.
her eyes are the deep blue sea
but in that sea is so much
upset, pain but yet happiness.
She is a lily surrounded by roses,
But this lily is beautiful, wonderful and magnificent.

This precious girl,
Is my girl.
And I will love her,
Look after her,
Cherish her.
I will make her happy,
Loved and wanted.
She will no longer be a beached whale waiting to be saved.
She will be the ray gracefully swimming in the sea.
She is the ray gracefully swimming in the sea.
Dear Lucy.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i fell in love with a girl who has had something happen to her in the past which is bad! ive loved her now for 3 months. :) its not oo good but i tried haha
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aria Siren 08 October 2013

Oh this is very good. I find it very hard to write about the people I love most. I always am afraid I won't get it right, but you did an awesome job. I especially enjoyed the last three verses. You described her pain and beauty in vivid and relatable ways. Your love for her really shines through and I agree with Soren, the line about the girl who cries through a flower is INCREDIBLE. Great ink.

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Søren Valentine 29 March 2013

Great write indeed! The third stanza is my favourite. 'Twas especially profound (in my opinion) and I simply love the line Is a girl who cries through a flower. That, my friend, is truly poetry. The emotion in the poem is great too- you can really feel the love you have for this girl, namely Lucy.

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Ray Quesada 28 March 2013

haha, i dated a girl named Lucy - great write my friend, and congrats on getting yourself a good chick!

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