My Turn...1 Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Turn...1

Rating: 5.0


I am back to her fold
I find her same as ever with new world
I knew I was to be with her for few more days
I shall have permanent parting ways

I caught her hand and wished
"Happy anniversary and cried"
she looked in my eyes
I was unable to hide or further try

She was so happy to find me
She was with me like giant tree
Offering all help and comfort
I had anchored ship in her port

"I shall have no regret"
Even if I have to surrender to fate"
She did not utter a word but lost in memory
She was praying and whispering to almighty

"Give me some more days o, creator"
I could feel pride and honor
Was she same when I had deserted "
I felt visibly moved and elated

I feel her hand slipping away
My eyes close and open in intermittent way
The stars seem waiting eagerly
I wish last breath so orderly

What shall have been left behind?
I have no answer to find
She is generous and kind heart woman
Above and all, caring human soul

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I am back to her fold I find her same as ever with new world

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Gajanan Mishra 20 June 2014

I have no answer to find, I like it, thanks.

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good Angelika Huezo1 minute ago very captivating and I really thought it grabbed my attention or the readers attention

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Perfectly Arsi IbroLess than a minute ago well done Comment +1

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She was so happy to find me She was with me like giant tree Offering all help and comfort I had anchored ship in her port

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

Beautiful poem. Heartfelt one. Beautiful lines.. She is generous and kind heart woman Above and all, caring human soul...

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Inspired after reading Ann Chen12 hours ago Is it memory loss? Is it a departure? Is it correct that I sense someone going somewhere? Someone who's going to be on their way, and never to return? Because if any of it is true. I hope from the bottom of my heart, to you and your soulmate, all the best

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Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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This poem just brought me to tears wow..what an amazing poem! ! ! ! ! Sumaya Sheikh AbukarLess than a minute ago You deserve way more than a 5

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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