*** Mystic Goddess Of Love *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

*** Mystic Goddess Of Love ***

Rating: 4.8


What shalt thou forget?
how canst one forget
this mystic goddess of love.
So slim like gazelle,
body chiselled
brown eyes sparkling
like stars twinkling
in the midnight skies.

Her face as milky
like snowflakes silky
lips a vermal red
blush deeper sweets
And cheeks like
apples in snow greets.
Silken strands of hair so brown
with streaks of golden hues,
fluttering in breeze
like crimson flags
atop the mountain tags.

When she’s around
Eden’s at play surround
Hast thou seen
the brilliant sun
Aloft the skies in a run?
Never did it more beautifully steep
Over treetops, mountains and vales so deep.
See how the ocean is lashing
Its waves upon the shores a dashing
And hear the sighs of
gentle breeze,
so distant
yet so close,
like flutes of yore.
See the roses in spring
with butterflies, peacocks
and bees in swing.

In desolation
and in happiness
thy love she is.
Her love thou remains
thy love poems show.
In the lap of love thou art
At nights, not alone
with perfumes and wine
and wanton hours,
shes always
in thy thoughts

On grainy sands of her heart
Thy name is etched from start
to end, the tears she sheds
like drops of blood
become crystals of diamonds
to sparkle for eternity.

Nay do not forget
Or shall I say
THOU SHALL NEVER
FORGET HER

That mystic goddess of love

05-02-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 07 February 2009

the tears she sheds like drops of blood become crystals of diamonds to sparkle for eternity..................oh what a mystic Gddess of love, beauty scintillates by art of mystery, mist of love drizzles over skin of red rose that sparkles ever and ever after, ingeniously curved by the beauty of love and the craving runs across the vernal desire, wrought luscious by excellent metaphors and imagery,10++++++, thanks for sharing

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 February 2009

mystical....wholesome.... created with all finery....with the depth immeasurable.... making the beauty of love more beautiful..... desirable and unfathomable... 10++++++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 07 February 2009

a lovely mystical picture with a lovely background score....truely grand

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Seema Aarella 07 February 2009

Its the unique magical touch of ur word sense that make your writings more ornamental and attractive....you never fail to draw attention.....beautful poem! 10+++++

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ata khan 07 February 2009

Absolutely Seema, she never fails to draw a keen attention. Keep it up Anjali.10+++++++

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Ravi Sathasivam 02 November 2009

'At nights, not alone with perfumes and wine and wanton hours, shes always in thy thoughts' Beautifully penned. An interesting piece. I always love to read your poems. Imagery has no limit. Keep write madam

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 May 2009

Like..wow...is this autobiographical? ? Mystical, ah, yes. Cheers. Subroto

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 23 May 2009

Marvelous and interesting piece on love....lovely

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Allemagne Roßmann 13 April 2009

Mystic pizza of a mysterious girl Myriad in the essence of myrhh as she twirl..............

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Shekhar Joshi 10 March 2009

the visual imagery is great i have never read a work like this using the old english by a modern writer great work

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