Need Not Expose Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Need Not Expose

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You need not expose
As it is not your prerogative to choose
Readers may read and evaluate
How far you are right to relate!

Criticism does not come from self
It is like deep sea and its shelf
It is hidden there with egoism
We only pretend it with heroism

Person cries only when surrounded
By all kinds of problem sand offended
Finds no escape and face the route
He presents it in the form of poetry and remains mute

I have come across many people
Who hide themselves from facing struggle!
Take short cut and express strong desire
But in fact withdraw steps under fire

It is known to all that poetry is medium
Where person feels proud with premium
He has vast field to maneuver
Express ideas and gently whisper

I shall consider it as rare imagination
It is like volcano coming out with eruption
The person is trying to justify own action
With known fact that he will face less reaction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

You need not expose As it is not your prerogative to choose

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Deep Helen LaveryLess than a minute ago On reading this I felt up lifted

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Wonderful poem..love it about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Lots of truth here... The Wedge2 minutes ago Good words and fine sentiments Hasmukh. As for me, I am my most ardent critic! Write on...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

a human, seeks refuge in many things including poetry, in times of adversity.He better face it sham gupta2 minutes ago A very well set thought, vivid expression. Wish sentences were a little shorter in the interest of beauty of language. A very well rhymed verse. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Enjoyed Daniel Dawes3 minutes ago Really enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Love the flow Jennifer Ridge2 minutes ago Love the reality Comment +1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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