Never Come Back To Me Poem by Malaya Roses

Never Come Back To Me

Rating: 5.0


Solitude in grey
Almost here
Undefined portrait of beauty
Mesmerizing wave was silent
Stunning shine of the sun
After many years
Keep hidden in your dark seclusion
Curtain of human
Wash the beast away
Never come back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 08 October 2011

I have to struggle to get this one, i wonder whether the 'Curtain of human' are the barriers of our visualization of what we need to see(the truth, real love, a person's real colours) .... Its a well rounded piece, bigger than my critique....

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Vipins Puthooran 07 October 2011

well written..(undefined portrait of beauty never come back to anyone) ..nice message.. It's a good poem.

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Hans Vr 05 October 2011

Strong message, very poetically expressed Sometimes indeed better to keep vice at a distance. It makes me happy to think I see a healing process going on.

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