Solitude in grey
Almost here
Undefined portrait of beauty
Mesmerizing wave was silent
Stunning shine of the sun
After many years
Keep hidden in your dark seclusion
Curtain of human
Wash the beast away
Never come back.
well written..(undefined portrait of beauty never come back to anyone) ..nice message.. It's a good poem.
Strong message, very poetically expressed Sometimes indeed better to keep vice at a distance. It makes me happy to think I see a healing process going on.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I have to struggle to get this one, i wonder whether the 'Curtain of human' are the barriers of our visualization of what we need to see(the truth, real love, a person's real colours) .... Its a well rounded piece, bigger than my critique....