New Year Poem by gul naz

New Year

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Each New Year is marked by hopes
Aspirations and faith for a new dawn
Prospects of change
And sanguinity strong
Hopes and hopes for the days to come
Wishes and wishes for the months to go

But this year is marked by horrid cold
It sounds someone has put an ice
On emotions, feelings,
Sentiments and sensations
A chill that lies somewhere within
Desires died and smiles faded

But still
I have dreamt of a peaceful world
Where no one can snatch morsel and crumb
Where humankind is in reality kind
Where slaying is not a pastime sport
Where parity rules and biases decline

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2010

Each New Year is marked by hopes Aspirations and faith for a new dawn Prospects of change And sanguinity strong.......thanks to almighty allah that each new year is gifted to usfor new hopes and aspirations.. we live to see the new miracles of life and this is how you have painted in your new poems.. i m fascinated at your simple presenttiaon, , , , ,10 read mine...o, lord... humble submission...yes to to

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Nikunj Sharma 04 January 2010

This is a wonderful poem where u have captured a heart's desires and longins. The feelings and emotions that have been put in cold storage by the brokers of violence. I see a sense of social concern here in this poem...I want to say Amen... Hazaron gul khilenge kabhie is gulsitan mein bhi...har raat ke baad kyunki din nikalta hai..

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Dom N. Kafley 01 January 2010

nice poem GUL, I have dreamt of a peaceful world Where no one can snatch morsel and crumb Where humankind is in reality kind Where slaying is not a pastime sport Where parity rules and biases decline ........ keep writing.. my new year wishes for you.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 01 January 2010

But still I have dreamt of a peaceful world Where no one can snatch morsel and crumb Where humankind is in reality kind Where slaying is not a pastime sport Where parity rules and biases decline Yes Gul, It's the dream that we all wish to realize. Keep your dream alive and keep writing. Naseer

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Ramin Chaman 01 January 2010

Hello Gul naz Thank you so much for your kind comments.. ............ and yes..Gul naz i agree with you.. But still I have dreamt of a peaceful world specially for our land.. ... ....and...Happy New Year ....................

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