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night time

the night is cold
the night is sad for some
the night is so dark
the night come and go like my love for you
the night is time for me to sleep and dream of you
the night is everwhere I go
the night is time for some people to have fun
the night is so alone for me
i hate the night becuase is reminds me of you
the night was when we had fun
the night is so alone now
the night is what you love
but now the night is what i hate beuase of you

Submitted: Thursday, August 28, 2008
Edited: Thursday, August 28, 2008


Comments about this poem (night time by Bradley Stewart )

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  • Emily Price (8/27/2009 2:33:00 PM)

    hi liked your poem its good

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  • Jay Lawson (12/9/2008 3:28:00 PM)

    Hi i think this poem is great and i can esily relate!

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  • Jacqui Deutsch (12/6/2008 8:12:00 PM)

    hey keep up the good work but i would suggest going over your work and re-reading it because you repeated a little bit but i still like it

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  • Dreamer Girl05 (12/6/2008 8:16:00 AM)

    Wow! I never thought that i would ever find a poem writen in the same style as me. Great Job! I Love It.

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