No Deceit Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
No Deceit
It is glazing-
The perfect polished granite
It shines super black
The wall you have built
The entrance across
It radiates heat that it receives
From the scorching summer sun-
Your ego, at its zenith
What if you claim your heart is tender?
Love rich warm and wet?
You first remove this wall
You have built inside your mind
I am waiting to step in
With my bare feet
No cover- no veil on my nails
No dust either, no deceit
16th March 2020
You first remove this wall You have built inside your mind I am waiting to step in With my naked feet No cover- no veil on my nails No dust either, none deceit /// excellently expressed; beautiful poem penned on friendship and living solidarity
YOU SKIPPED MY COMMENT DIDN'T LIKE IT TELL ME I SHALL REMOVE IT KVE From the scorching summer sun- Your ego, at its zenith just beautiful show them your bare feet nudity is a preserve for someone special great words o poet keep at it
The usage of the word wall is always amazing...from graffiti to inhibition...you have impressed the reader very much using 'wall' in your unique style...great work 10++
A strikingly lovely metaphor to convey honest devoid of deceit. Well done dear poet.
An excellent metaphorical write. In friendship there should be no pretensions. We should lay our cards on the table. Be open and honest. Brilliantly penned!
Friendship needs no cover. It cannot enter where there are walls of separation erected. It can come only when the heart is open without walls or barricades. A lovely metaphorical poem!
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 5:57:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
It radiates heat that it receives/From the scorching summer sun- Your ego, at its zenith......wonderful expression! An excellent poem........10+++
Thanks for your read and for your good feedback, Dillip