No More Me Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No More Me

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I did not know
When did I slip to go?
I found myself helpless
Not able to control in any case

He too was sincere
Not afraid with any fear
He disclosed it many times
I was loosing to him this time

Yes I will not object
When he may come near and react
I shall resist no more
He will smile and feel no sore

Oh god, what was happening?
I was really shining
My face was getting uplift
There was clear shift

It was no more me
I was not free
The lovely bird out in open
The change was sudden

I shall chirp
And keep
Melody with tune
That shall be heard and seen

Sunday, August 24, 2014
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Somanathan Iyer 24 August 2014

getting freed from inhibitions and letting accommodate really nice transformation. Nice poem, happy reading!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

Sachi Ramnauth Hahaha You slipped? 2 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

x really nice Sean Stapelfeld9 minutes ago Very good, enjoyed it 57 minutes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

great spiritual message Roxanne Varey9 minutes ago good work Comment +1 57 minutes ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

I did not know When did I slip to go?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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