No One, But Two... Know Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

No One, But Two... Know



It is fine really,
ride the light of the sun.
It only shines once a day,
peaks of light from other eyes,
look Ellesmere, unto themselves.
Those in noise, are only the feats
of the others,
who came before us, see even
they like bees, must rest for a spell.

On your face, pin pricks, are little feet
once again in dance, calling Queen..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhishek Katoch 26 March 2010

the imaginary of the poet is to superbb at he compared with the qeen........excellent

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Catrina Heart 24 May 2009

Lovely poetry with fine imagery painted.....calling Queen? nice ending line........10+++

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Fiona Davidson 24 May 2009

Excellent write iip.....Fi 10+++

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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